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Friday 8 May 2015

Happy Mother's day!

                   The Coolest Mum Ever!

My mum is the best mum that a family could ever wish for. She supports me in sports whether I win or lose.She is also helpful, when I am stuck with my homework or when I need help to clean my room. She is always there for me.My mum works hard so she can have money to pay for my sister's university and pays for the bills from the bank. I love my mum very much and she says I am her number one fan.

WALT: write a description.

Success criteria: I know I can do this when I use the right structure for my writing.       

1 comment:

  1. Malo Lelei Mana,
    I like the way that you have described your mum and how you used interesting words to describe. I like how you wrote about the hard jobs that your mum has done for you and your sister.
    What could you surprise your mum with?

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